Revision+Checklist

Revision Checklist by __________________
 * Whisper read the essay aloud. (You can go in the hall.) Note any changes you need to make.
 * Underline the capital letter of each word in the title.
 * Number each paragraph. You should have 5.
 * Put an arrow by each indentation for a new paragraph.
 * Underline your question, interesting fact, or lead in the first paragraph in light green.
 * Put a box around your opinion or topic sentence in the first and last paragraph.
 * Put a star by each of the three reasons in paragraph one.
 * Circle the transition words of paragraphs 2-5.
 * Underline the topic sentence of paragraphs 2-5 in red.
 * Underline the first detail of paragraphs 2-5 in blue. (This may be a quote or experience.)
 * Underline the second detail of paragraphs 2-5 in yellow. (This may be a quote or experience.)
 * Underline the third detail of paragraphs 2-5 in green. (This may be a quote or experience.)
 * Underline the conclusion or wrap up sentence of paragraphs 2-5 in purple.
 * Are all paragraphs focused on the main idea or topic? Cross out any idea that is not connected to the main idea or topic.
 * Change at least 5 words to better, more descriptive words.
 * Check punctuation, spelling, and grammar.